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個人陳述開頭這樣寫才漂亮

2014-09-29 來源:Reader8.cn 
  出國留學網小編為大家介紹個人陳述開頭這樣寫才漂亮,希望對出國留學的同學有所幫助。想了解更多留學精彩內容,出國留學網為你詳細解答。  如果個人陳述的開頭比
   出國留學網小編為大家介紹個人陳述開頭這樣寫才漂亮,希望對出國留學的同學有所幫助。想了解更多留學精彩內容,出國留學網為你詳細解答。

  如果個人陳述的開頭比較動人,能夠吸引評審教授讀下去,開頭的寫法必須能帶動全文,使文章能夠動的起來,也使文氣能夠延續下去,對于讀者要能引起動機,使他們有往下看的動力,否則就成為一篇死氣沉沉的文章了。

  開門見山法――先點出重點,再依據事件發生順序,將所見所聞寫出:

  I was lucky in the fact that I picked chemical engineering and it turned out to be the right choice for me. However, my first semester at college was a rude shock - being away from home for the first time, being in a relatively male-dominated field

  I started in a test lab for airplanes, where I got to break things. That is called static and fatigue testing. Then I went into design for airplanes. I worked on all areas of commercial planes including the floors and windows. I am most proud of my testing projects

  引用法――美國留學個人陳述開頭引用各種資料,加以引申,達到吸引讀者,幫助突出中心的作用:

  When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don''t need.” For me, life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty. During over four years’ my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’ confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do.

  精辟設喻法――留學ps開頭設喻,以引起讀者對要說明的事物或道理的興趣:

  “Life is just like the ocean----whatever choice you make as a steersman, you must be well aware of your favorite, namely, which is worthy of pursuing in your whole lifetime!”

  Since I was admitted into ××× university three years ago, these words, just like a bright lamp, have been lightening my future and leading the way to my favorite career--- the studies of educational technology.

  背景漸入法:

  1、 美國留學個人陳述開頭引入家庭背景

  My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father''s office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in business Administration.

  2、 引入特殊事件,闡述興趣的起源

  As I was finishing college, my mother had both of her hips replaced with artificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away and it was very painful for her to walk. I found it fascinating that engineers, orthopedic surgeons, and biologists had all worked together to design these artificial joints that completely transform people''s lives by giving them back pain-free mobility, and I knew at that moment that this was an area about which I wanted to learn more.

  美國留學個人陳述開頭,引用,精辟設喻,同時運用了寫作風格中的哲理型,寫作句式中的對話式。所以要想讓自己PS的開頭吸引人,不妨結合自己的特點,對以上開頭進行綜合運用。


(作者:讀書人網留學頻道 編輯:kind887)
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