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托福寫作:熱點難點機經解析:值得一看的電影

2015-09-25 來源:讀書人網 
托福名師在此為各位考生詳細解析2015年9月下旬熱點機經:   Do you agree or disagree with the following s

托福名師在此為各位考生詳細解析2015年9月下旬熱點機經: 

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching. 

  你是否同意以下觀點?只有能夠從某些方面教導我們真實生活的電影才值得一看。

  下面托福名師將從破題關鍵、論點分析和語料整理三個角度具體分析。祝各位考生一站成功、贏得考官青睞、走上人生巔峰。

  一、破題關鍵 

  托福名師私下也常跟各位考生聊起什么電影值得一看?大多數考生都能很輕松地給出一番自己的見解,因此證明此類話題本身并沒有什么難度。但此題加入了兩個限定,一是“只有”,二是“教導我們真實生活”,讀起來就變得佶屈聱牙,成了公認的難題。

  此題破題關鍵就在于題干中出現的“只有(only)”。看到類似只有、僅僅等帶有絕對語氣的表述出現,從實戰出發,我們毫無疑問選擇批駁。

  二、論點分析 

  關于批駁論證,文韜老師一向建議考生采取讓步結構,再從比較論證、發覺自身兩個層次建立分論點。

  反對:并不是只有能夠從某些方面教導我們真實生活的電影才值得一看。

  確立主論點時,各位考生務必針對“只有”一詞進行批駁。如果以“很多電影都有價值”為主論點,容易在展開時出現跑題、偏題等現象。

  【理由】: 

  誠然能夠從某些方面教導我們真實生活的電影還是值得一看的。

  但是通過比較可以證明其它類型的電影也值得一看,比如科幻片激發想象力、卡通片讓觀眾輕松愉快,他們都不展現真實生活,但也值得一看。

  此外,教導我們真實生活的電影并不一定適合所有人,比如電影中有色情、暴力、兇殺等,小孩子就不一定能正確認知,因此所謂值得一看也并非針對所有人,更不必說只有真實的才值得一看。

  三、語料整理 

  Delight and relaxation are indispensable elements to sound health. Comedies and cartoons are worth watching, for we may relax for a while by only watching and giggling. To tell the truth, many people with demanding jobs need those movies that are not too serious and didactic to release their pressure caused by tight daily work.

  必不可缺的要素:indispensable elements

  輕松一下:relax for a while

  咯咯傻笑:giggle

  要求嚴苛的:demanding

  緩解壓力:reduce pressure, release stress

  減輕痛苦:alleviate pain, relieve pain

  Watching science fiction movies also stirs people’s imagination, stimulates creativity, and gives them insights into various realms. So not only do viewers simply have different ways to develop their ability to think, but they also enjoy the visual delight provided by three-dimension effect.

  激發想象力:stirs imagination

  啟迪創造力:stimulate creativity

  思維能力:ability to think

  立體效果:three-dimension effect

  Many teenagers may have a Kongfu dream and consider that those Kongfu stars in action movies are heroes. Unfortunately, some children may indulge in such visual delight provided by action movies and believe that only their fist can help the weak in need. As a result, they are more likely to resort to violence, when they suffer difficulties in real life. Those worth watching movies actually pose a potential threat to our society and poison the young generation.

  功夫夢:Kongfu dream

  功夫明星:Kongfu star

  動作電影:action movie

  弱勢群體:the weak group

  構成威脅:pose a threat to


(作者:網絡 編輯:kind887)
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